yesterday, I went to ski with my friends. Most of um road board also it was really fun. We went to Jisan and road 6 hours, at the morning it was not corowded but during the afternoon it was really crowded. however it was really fun.

Snow board is a great sports. I think it was a great day, because it was really fun, exciting and interesting.

I figrued out a new skills, I can trun 720, with rushing.

How many people died because of communism, how many people were suffering, how many people lost their freedom because of communism! It have to change, there should be no communism in the world. Many countries were communism during cold war but those countries changed to democracy and they realized communism is worst than democracy. Communism is the political belief that all people are equal and that workers should control the means of producing things, and democracy means is a system of government in which people choose their rulers by voting for them in elections, democracy is better than communism because it has freedom, have a better economic system and they have peace.

Democracies have freedom! Imagine that people have to live in a certain area and they are not aloud to do anything if government do not aloud them to do, how terrible is it!? Democracy countries provide freedom to people, also they can buy their own house, car, and they can earn their own money, but in communism country they are not aloud to keep their own car, house or money. Citizen of democracy can do whatever thing if it is legal and right thing. This is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.

If you want to be different with the other people than you should be in democracy. If you are hard worker or do extra work than you might become successful person also you can have your own money therefore you can be a rich person, but in the communism country no matter what you did, you have to get same amount of money with person who didn’t work hard, how unfair is it?, if you want be different with the other people than you should go to democracy country, you can be successful and be a rich person.

A few hundreds years ago many countries were suffered because of war, but in democracy country you don’t have to worry about, people who live in democracy country, they are safe and government protect citizen, but people who live in communism they always have to worry about their security also the government do no care about their citizen’s safety, this is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.

Like what you read in this essay, democracy is better than communism because they have freedom, better economic and last it has peace.

APM!

Today, my friends and I decided to go APM, which is in Dongdamon. I use to go ShinSaga department store but we went to APM. Peter, Richard, Joon and I bought many clothe also we went to Meaung dong and bought many food that we can eat.

Today, was a great day because I bought many clothe and it is really chip. I think today was one of the most happy day in my life.


I though dongdamon is really bad place but i realized it is good place to us.

second draft

World War 2
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee

Many people think World War 2 is a huge, complicate, violence and useless war during world his story but World War two gave huge effects to world. In 1939, September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. This result gives many effects to world but! what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.

This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.

If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.

German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons but! They are not winner of World War 2, Germany is loser of World War 2, middle of world war 2, many country thought German will winner of World War2 but, it didn’t go like that, during attacking Russia, many German soldier died because of weather. It was very cold therefore the weapons were not working. What if German is winner of World War 2 than it will give a huge effect to world. If German beat United States and the other European countries than World common language will be change to German because people want to learn and know, about strongest world language. Second many country will be communism country not democracy country, if a lot of countries are communism than It will give many unbenefit things to world economic.

There is many way to change history or other complicated happen, like what I said in this essay, there is many way to change result of World War 2. First, if Japan is winner of World War 2 or if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb than probably it will change whole history of world. Also if German is winner of World War 2 than it also change whole world history.

sundy!!!

Life Church~

Today is my fourth time that I went to Life Chruch, usually dorm kids and staff kids are go to life but I decided to go Life Chruch, I called to Joon and peter, and I asked them to come and they came tolife chruch. After chruck we went to PC room and played starcraft it was pretty fun aftet that we went to KFC and ate the chicken.

Today it was little bit special day because today is Sunday but I played with my friends, I think I am in very goood mood, I hope I can have this kind of day, untill I die.

In chruch I learned about prayer

Today, is the most boring day in my life, I woke up around at 11 o'clcok, when I woke up I saw a letter on my desk, I started to read that letter, the main point was " Hey son we will back to home around 8 o'clock therefore, stay in home and complete your homewrok, do not go out side and play with your firends. " After that I took shower and do my homework, also I read Charlie and the great glass elevator" However after that I wathced TV for 3? hours, however it was the most boring day during my life.

Today, it was boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! day....................................... I hope I can have a better life tommorow.

Today, I dind't learn anything................

I came to GSIS last September and in this school there is Award things, Last year I didn't get any awards but today I got writing award, Mr. Fambro called my name and Miss. Brown gave me award thing. When I get award thing everyone were surprised.


Today, I am really good mood ^^, I will work hard and I will get many awards thing next semester but I have to go to Hakwon in English therefore I think my mood will be go don.


I realized that if I worked hard than, I will get pice.

World War 2
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee

Many people think World War 2 is a huge and complicated war during world his story but World War two is giving huge effect to world. 1939. September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. These results give many effects to world but what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.

This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.

If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.

German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons.

World War 2 is giving huge effect, probably it is biggest war.

Sunday

"Dayeon! you should wake up, it is 9:40. I opened my eyes with my mom's calling, when I wake up I started to prepared to go chruch, I use to go chruch in seould but i moved to Suwon therefore I went to life church where is in Gsis, after chapel my friend and I ate pizza, chips and chinse food. I don't know why but our church bought huge amout of delicious food, however it was really delicious. OH and I bought Ipod.

Today, I felt fantastic because I ate delisious food and life chruch was great^^, probably i will go to this chruch. I think today is one of my best day.

I learned about Ipod, Ipod is a cool and great equipment.

Friday

Today, I slpet in peter's house, we played card game for 2 and half hours also we played computer games. After that we wento out side and walk for while, after that we ordered a chicken, steven and I ate many peice of chicekn but peter didn't, and we slept.



Today, it was really fun day, because us four played in Bundang and Steven, and I slept in peter's house with peter. However it was real fantastic day.

I learned world war 2 in Hakwon, we use to discuss about one sepesific topic but we learned about World war 2
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The three most important relationships that a student has.

Imagine that you are the only person in the world. There is no person beside you, no animals beside you, or no plants beside you. Nothing is beside you. How terrible it is? In human life the most important thing is relationship, without relation people can not communicate with other people. While, students think relationship is a very important thing to them also relationship give many effect to their life. There are three most important relationships that a student has; first it is relationship between their families such as their parents. Second, relationship between their friends. Third, relationship between their pet. These three things are the most important things in their life.

“You have to do what I am saying! You have obeyed to me” this is what most parents say to their children. There are two kinds of relationships between parents and their children. First they have great relationships, they have meaningful conversation between each other also they can understand their emotion. If they have great relation ship than the children will learn many things form their parents such as, good social relationships and how to respect elder people. Second there are horrible relationships between parents and children. They can not understand each other and they don’t want to have conversation with each other. If they have bad relationship than they are not learn good mantle society and they will not know what respect is. In addition a relationship between parents and their children is important thing.

Your friends can give a huge effect to our life. When you have great friends than he or she will give you many benefit things to you, such as when you choose a wrong choice than they will help and give an advice to you. When you tried to smoke they will try to stop you. If you have bad friends they will give you bad effect to you, such as they will recommend bad thing to you such as smoking, drugging and the other things. Also they will give you bad opportunity to you.

After school you went to your lovely home and there are no parents or brother or sister. There is a quite tiny dog is looking for you and trying to play with you. These days, people do not like dog but pets are really huge part to students. When they feel loneliness or pain, most teenagers doesn’t want to share their feeling with their parents or friends. If they don’t express their feeling than probably they will feel strong pain and they will get huge amount of stress. If they have a pet than they can express or telling their feeling to their pet. The pets are the most believable thing in earth. Human can be trade but pets never be trade human.

Like what I said, relationships are very important to people. It gives many effects to people. When you are student those relationships are giving a huge effect to student’s life. Relationships between parents are the most important relationship. Second, relationship between their friends this relationships are second important relationship to students. Last, relationships between their pets. Also students have to make great relationships between their family (parents), friends and their pet.

SFS( Soccer)

At 10 :05 my sister and I leave our house, and we arrived in school around at 10:10. When we arrive in school we took C bus and went to SFS, there were no friends in bus because, all my friends are morning team or there are using their car therefore I listing music for 1 and half hours. However when I arrive in SFS, I was really sick therefore I couldn't run propery. After one game, our team played with IIS, I made thee goals in this game therefore our team beat IIS after that we played KIS team1 we lost really badly, I was really frustrated because they were extremly rood, however next game we played with KIS team2 it was tied and this game was okay.

Today, I am very frustrated because of some of stupid KIS students, Also we lost w games and my condition was not great because of those reason I am very bad mood.


I realized and I learned that KIS kids are stupid, next time when I meet KIS kids probably i will just ignored them

Dayeon lee first draft ~!

The three most important relationships that a student has.

Imagine that you are the only person in the world. There is no person beside you, no animals beside you, or no plants beside you. Nothing is beside you. How terrible it is? In human life the most important thing is relationship, without relation people can not communicate with other people. While, students think relationship is a very important thing to them also relationship give many effect to their life. There are three most important relationships that a student has; first it is relationship between their family such as their parents. Second, relationship between their friends. Third, relationship between their pet. These three things are the most important things in their life.

“You have to do what I am saying! You have obeyed to me” this is what most parents say to their children. There are two kinds of relationships between parents and their children. First they have great relationships, they have meaningful conversation between each other also they can understand their emotion. If they have great relation ship than the children will learn many things form their parents such as, good social relationships and how to respect elder people. Second there are horrible relationships between parents and children. They can not understand each other and they don’t want to have conversation with each other. If they have bad relationship than they are not learn good mantle society and they will not know what respect is. In addition a relationship between parents and their children is important thing.

Your friends can give a huge effect to our life. When you have great friends than he or she will give you many benefit things to you, such as when you choose a wrong choice than they will help and give an advice to you. When you tried to smoke they will try to stop you. If you have bad friends they will give you bad effect to you, such as they will recommend bad thing to you such as smoking, drugging and the other things. Also they will give you bad opportunity to you.

After school you went to your lovely home and there are no parents or brother or sister. There is a quite tiny dog is looking for you and trying to play with you. These days, people do not like dog but pets are really huge part to students. When they feel loneliness or pain, most teenagers doesn’t want to share their feeling with their parents or friends. If they don’t express their feeling than probably they will feel strong pain and they will get huge amount of stress. If they have a pet than they can express or telling their feeling to their pet. The pets are the most believable thing in earth. Human can be trade but pets never be trade human.

Like what I said, relationships are very important to people. It gives many effects to people. Also students have to make great relationships between their family (parents), friends and their pet

Today, I went to life church which is in GSIS, after chapel my friends and i went to a room, It was behind audutorium however the pastor was great. After church i went to my house and i did my reading, writting and math homework and I studied little bit for math and reading because i will take a test. After that my family and I went to a resturant and ate the food .

Today, it was quite different with usual day because i went to differnt chruch however it was fun but my original chruch was better than this one.

Today, I am very tired becuase i studied a lot ^^ ? however i think i should take a break and go to bed. i hope i can have a good score.

Dayeon Lee
Writing 8th
Mr. Fambro

First draft

When I saw his music video or listing music I can feel, powerful, enjoyable, Flexible, rhythmical and surprised. Most people think Hip Hop and R&B is for man but theses day it is silently changing. A few years ago a woman entrance on the stage. Ciara Princess Harris, she was born is October 25, 1985. In the summer of 2004 she made hit song its call “Goodies” the second album was Ciara: The Evolution, was released in December 2006. There were few hit songs “get up” “promise” these two songs are represent her. The album has sold nearly sold two millions.

She was born in Austin, Taxes. She is the only child in her home. She grew up in army base in the other countries such as Germany, New York, California and the other cities. She has a great personality therefore she did adjustment very well; also she is a great leader. During her teens Ciara and her family lived in Atlanta. When she was young she loved to listening to the music and dancing with her friends. She was not good at subjects that need study. However Ciara joined Hearsay and worked on her songwriting. The group was not match with Ciara therefore eventually she left the group. Ciara graduated high school that is in United States, she began to make a song and her first album was “Yeah” After that her song “Goodies” this song is the most popular song in United States and United Kingdom also the albums were selling 2.63 million. “Goodies” is world hit song many people in world know about this song. There are many hit songs and albums. In 2005 Ciara made DVD that include her Music video such as documents, “Goodies, Missy Elliott's "Lose Control" from her album The Cookbook and Bow Wow’s "Like You" from his album Wanted. In 2006, Ciara started a new year by winning her first Germany Award for Missy Elliott's "Lose Control". After that she made second single album, that album was selling in many different European country including United Kingdom. There are many albums and most of those album songs are hit songs. Also she has concerts in Asia. Ciara is a famous world star and she has many concerts in Asia, America and Europe.

Her song and albums: "Goodies" ,Missy Elliott, Oh, Goodies: The Videos & More, So What" All You've Got, Get Up "Promise Ring." "That's Right “Goodies is a song written by American singer Ciara Harris. It was first album to Ciara and this was a hit song and because of this song many people in the world started know about Ciara. “Get up” is a song written by Ciara Harris, Hakeem Seriki, and Phalon Alexander. It was a dance song also it showed romantic either. This was second album for Ciara and it was first album in 2006. “Get up” is remake of "Somebody's Watching Me” this album was also hit album. Many European and Americans were buying this album. In this song, two girls were dancing in the club but without speaking they can understand their feeling and they can conversation with out talking. “ so what is her third album.
Chart (2006)
Peakposition
U.S. Billboard Hot 100
10
U.S. Billboard R&B/Hip Hop Songs
4
U.S. Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Singles Sales
23
U.S. Billboard Hot Rap Tracks
3
U.S. Billboard Pop 100
13
Australian ARIA Charts
40
UK Top 75 Singles
56


She is a top R&B and Hip hop star she worked really hard, she is an intelligent woman but she worked really hard. First when she have concert she practice for many times. The practice time was longer than sleeping time. It means she worked really hard. I think when we want to achieve or success a goal than we need a lot of practice. Also the amount of practicing can change the result.
Second, when she concentrates none of um can’t disturb her. I think this concentration is the most important and giving a huge effect. When we concentrate we can do anything with putting small effort.


Before I do this essay, I thought Ciara is a normal singer just like the other one but I realized she is a different singer with the other singer. I strongly recommend that people who like hip hop or R&B, they should listen her songs. She is a favorite and famous world star. She has a lot of hit songs and she is a hard worker.

late work

A few days ago I played with my friends in Bundang, we went to Pc room and we did shopping. After that we tried to go to Norabang and we met high school students. They were calling me therefore we started to ran away. Steven, peter and Richard were really fast threrefore they didn't cought but I was slowest therefore I got cought but one of their group. They tried to cathch peter but peter was so fast so they just catch me. However mt firends asked help to adult and that adult saved us.


Thrill!!!!! . Today was the most unlucky day because we met highschool students also I felt little bir of scard


I think I should not play in Bundang anymore also I need to pratice of runnning.

Today, I woke up around at 6:30 becuase I need to follow my sister and cheer our soccer team. Some of my friends played soccer today, they did great job. Also they win many games. After soccer we tried to play in Coex but my parents not allowed to me play therefore I couldn't but most of my friends played. I came back to my house and I started to do my reading, social, writting homework. I will play with Joon when I finish my homework.

I am very tired because I should sleep more than 12 hours but I coudnt therefore I am very tired and Sleepy. I hope I can sleep more than 20 hours tomrow. However today was a great day because I could watch the soccer game and I ate Korean tradtional food.

I figured out new soccer skills, it was based on prosoccer player's skills but it gave a great feeling to me. Also I realized there are many couple in this school.

first draft

Dayeon Lee
Writing 8th
Mr. Fambro

First draft

When I saw his music video or listing music I can feel, powerful, enjoyable, Flexible, rhythmical and surprised. Most people think Hip Hop and R&B is for man but theses day it is silently changing. A few years ago a woman entrance on the stage. Ciara Princess Harris, she was born is October 25, 1985. In the summer of 2004 she made hit song its call “Goodies” the second album was Ciara: The Evolution, was released in December 2006. There were few hit songs “get up” “promise” these two songs are represent her. The album has sold nearly sold two millions.

She was born in Austin, Taxes. She is the only child in her home. She grew up in army base in the other countries such as Germany, New York, California and the other cities. She has a great personality therefore she did adjustment very well; also she is a great leader. During her teens Ciara and her family lived in Atlanta. When she was young she loved to listening to the music and dancing with her friends. She was not good at subjects that need study. However Ciara joined Hearsay and worked on her songwriting. The group was not match with Ciara therefore eventually she left the group. Ciara graduated high school that is in United States, she began to make a song and her first album was “Yeah” After that her song “Goodies” this song is the most popular song in United States and United Kingdom also the albums were selling 2.63 million. “Goodies” is world hit song many people in world know about this song. There are many hit songs and albums. In 2005 Ciara made DVD that include her Music video such as documents, “Goodies, Missy Elliott's "Lose Control" from her album The Cookbook and Bow Wow’s "Like You" from his album Wanted. In 2006, Ciara started a new year by winning her first Germany Award for Missy Elliott's "Lose Control". After that she made second single album, that album was selling in many different European country including United Kingdom. There are many albums and most of those album songs are hit songs. Also she has concerts in Asia. Ciara is a famous world star and she has many concerts in Asia, America and Europe.

Her song and albums: "Goodies" ,Missy Elliott, Oh, Goodies: The Videos & More, So What" All You've Got, Get Up "Promise Ring." "That's Right (I will explain these songs also tell specific things people’s feeling)


She is a top R&B and Hip hop star she worked really hard, she is an intelligent woman but she worked really hard. First…………………..
Second…………………….
Third……………

Before I do this essay, I thought Ciara is a normal singer just like the other one but I realized she is a different singer with the other singer. I strongly recommend that people who like hip hop or R&B, they should listen her songs. She is a favorite and famous world star. She has a lot of hit songs and she is a hard worker.

Final draft

United and let’s having fun with our family!
Writing8
Mr.Fambro class
Written by Dayeon Lee
Final draft

South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice the government is not aloud to make a decision what ever they want to do. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.

North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea has a strong economic power therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore South Korea can help North Korea with technology. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. In communism country there is no individual property therefore most people do not want to do hard work because no matter what they will get same amount of money, food, and territory with people who doesn’t work hard. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore their economic can improve and South Korea has to teach about effort. (Without effort we can’t achieve anything)

In 21 century, money and authority is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. Imagine how great North and South Korea can work together. When I read this article I was quite shocked because I never thought North and South Korea will work with same time or helping each other. In the article it said, South Korea is making a road that connecting North Korea and South Korea. It is a meaningful thing because it means North Korea want to communicate and open their mind with South Korea. People can eat food one hand but it is hard to eat, people can walk with one foot but it is hard do to walk and people can’ live with half heart. Korea is divided in two countries. It means they lost their half part of body. Imagine we are don’t have half part of body it is terrible and it is uncomfortable. It give many effect to both side.


If South Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. People in the world they know Korean people are very brilliant and intelligent. Also they think North Korea is one of powerful country in the world. Second Korea will give many effects to world economic because South Korea has great technologies but the companies have to pay a lot of money to worker but North Korea doesn’t have great technology but they have chip and strong worker. Third, if Korea and North Korea unified than there is no divided country in the world. Also there is no communism country in the world, it is related with peace. North Korea is one of the most harmful and dangerous country in the world. It will keep world peace. It will give many effects to world economic and the other things. They should find their half part and have to improve many things.

Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve something that is important than we should do hard work and put a lot of effort to that specific situation. . North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve. Both Korea is putting effort and they are communicating each other. Also like what said in article, if those projects are complete and successful than it is coming closer to unified.

Extra feeling, extra opinion
Before I read and write about this article I thought North Korea is a uneducated and wild country because in the news and the other country said North Korea is the most harmful and dangerous country in the world therefore I thought North Korea is not okay country even people who were in North Korea and I had same ancestor. After reading and writing about this article I realized we need to figure out how family is important.

saturday

Today, I played with my old school friends. We met in Jonlo, howevr we played soccer, baksetball and went to Norabang. There were 12 people include girl and me. Our team girl was really strong thereforeo our team beat the other team. When we went to Norabang everyone were singing except me.

It was quite surprised because all my friends changed totally. First time it was really quite but after 20 minutes we started to talk and play. However it was fantastic and cool.

I got many phone number, i got many pretty? girl phone number, it was a great day.

late work :

On firday I played went to Hakwon, It was qutie different with the other hakwon, usually in Hakwon I have to memorize the vocabulary words, read and do reading com question but in this Hakwon i have to read a book and discuss with my other friedns. I worked with peter, steven, Richard, Mary and Elizabeth. After Hakwon I took a bus and went to my house.


I think I need to talk a lot when teacher asked me questions to me. If I answer many questions when teacher ask me than i will improve a lot.


Martin Luthor was a great leader. I read his speach today, before I read his speach I thought his speach is a normal speach like the other one but I realized his speach is a special speach. He don't want to use violence to US citizen, he was a great leader.

first draft

United and let’s having fun with our family!

South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.

North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea have a better economic therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore they can help with this. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore they can have similar mind with us.

In 21 century, money and power is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. …………………

If Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. When they become one county. Second …………………….
Third…………………….

Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve, North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve.

EOP, Last year our school used this polocy. It means English only polocy but it changed to LUP language use ? polocy. I don't know about new polocy. However I went to detention room today, because I said "I will kill u" and front part of s word. I think I should not use bad word. After school I ate met with my family and I took a Hakwon test.


I wasn't that good mood today because I had detention instead of fun firday. I hope I can have better day. Also I am very tired today. I will eat Lamean and watch Tv.

I think I should not use bad words. Also I will learn meaning of Lup and I will keep that polocy.

10-11-07

What happened?
Today, soccer pratice was kind of special. At first game it was normal soccer practice but in second game, it was totally different with normal pratice. We played Sam's team and we scored 5 times. The score was 5:0, when score became 5:0 Mr. Martinaz put Steven, Mathew, Mr.Lee and the all the player. it was 14 vs 7 but the score was 5:0. I realized and we prove that our soccer team is best team in Gsis.

Today, it was fantastic! because we beat steven's team and Sam's team. Also I bought new clothe in Lotte department^^. I think today is the best day in this mounth. I hope I can have this kind of day until I die.


Team work is the most important thing, when we play soccer. Also team work is important thing in our life. Nomatter what is it and how good is it.

10/10/07

Today, I took reading and writting test. The reading test was kind of hard there were about 39 questions. After reading test I took writting test. They gave 30 minutes to write, it was kind of short because I have to think, write and correct my mistake. After test I did chapel after chapel we did a class. I ate launch with my friends after that I played soccer. The game was 8th vs 7th and 9th grade. The score was 3:3.

Today it was an easy day because I took test which is not involve in out grade. I played soccer, also I had easy subject today but I am tired becasue I have so many homework.

I figured out new soccer skill!!! Steven and Peter, they both have shooting skill but I wasn't but I figured out skill also my driball was best(?) I think I can do better job.

test day.

When I arrived in school, I went to my homeroom after that I went to Mrs.Bae's class room because I have to take a test. When I went to Mrs.Bae's class, she started to explain the test. It wasn't effect to our grade but she said it will affect our school grade therefore I decided to do my best. At first I took an easy math test and after that I took a little bit harder one. After math test I took writting test.

At first, I was nervous because I thought this test will give a lot of effect to our grade but after this test is not affecting to our grade therefore I started to take a test with less pressure. However I was great because I made three goals during soccer practice.


I think I need work hard and read more book because when I wrote a story and correct my writting it was really bad therefore I think I need study harder.

10-4-07

My soccer team need teamwork, Our teammate have a great skill but they don't work with team, they all work individualy, when other team attck our defenders never help goal keeper. Also when offender attack, middlefilder don't help ofender. I am the team captain, I will mkae our team a strongest team in our school and international school. Also we lost to Joon's team. I think we should learn about team work.

I was kind of angery today because I lost to Joon's team also I have a lot of homework, also I am very tired because I played soccer and after soccer I ride car for 1 and half hour. I think I should take a break and go to sleep.

Team work is the most important thing in soccer or the other sports. Before today I tought we don't need teamwork if we have good skills but I realized we need good team work, we wiill work with team and we will be a best team in GSIS

10-3-07

Today is a national foundation day of Korea. BC 2333, Danggun made a Korea. I dind't Know that toaday is national foundayion day of Korea but I realized during Korean class. I lerned about national foundayion day of Korea, and I read a mythlogoy about this day. In this book, thaey said Hwang wong and Danggun made rules and that is devotion to the welfare of humanitarianism. I realized today is a most important day in Korea therefore, I bought a Korean flag and I put in my house. Today was a meaningful day.

Today, I was kind of frustrated because my teachers gave a bunch of homework also I fought with my sister. Also I am very tired because I went to bed at 10 o' clock and I woke up at 4 o' clock.

I learned what is national foundation day of Korea and who is Ddanggun, Hwangwong. Before Korean class I didn't know much about national foundation day of Korea and these two people but I learned who are they and national foundation day of Korea.

10-2-07

Today, Mr.Jacobsen's made six teams and the teams are kind of equal. Our team has many six grade ,few 7th grade and few 8th grade. Our team played with Steven's team and Sam's team we beat that two teams. When I see our team I thought our team is worst team in GSIS but I realized our team is best in GSIS. Also I am captain of this team ^^. I think our team will do better than last year.

Today, I was really tired becuase I slept only 7 hours and I played soccer. I think our school have give small amount of homework to us, so we can enjoy our life and can play with our friends.

I learn , new math skills and china history. It was hard but I am glad at learning.

10-1-07

Today is october!!! first!!. Yesterday I was very excitied because it will become new mounth and it is almost end of year. Some reason I woke up at 4 o'clcok probably I was so excited about new mounth. On October is my best mounth because october is climax of fall also I love number 10. Howevr when I woke up I took shower and I started to exerciseing, a few mounth ago I heart my right arm therfore I started cure my right arm. After exercising I did my social study homework and I started to prepare go to school. After school I went to my home and I did science homewrok after that I read a book and I played computer games ( Starcraft)

Today was a great day! Today is on October and I don't have homework^^. I think my life should be like this until I die. If my life is like this unil I die, I think I wiill be a succesful and happy person.

I learned, new mathmatical things. Rational numbers, irrational number....... however I learned many new things.

Chuseok

Chuseok is the most important holiday in Korea, because of chuseok Korean people get break and get time to spend with their family but most people in Korea even don’t know meaning of chuseok, why chuseok is so important, and what do we have to do during chuseok. In this essay, I will talk about why chuseok is so important to us, traditional food, and what did I do during chuseok.

Chuseok……..is one of the most important day in Korea but many Korean people don’t know, why Chuseok is so important to us. Korean people just celebrate and have fun with their family but, we need to know about why chuseok is important to us. A long time ago many Korean people did farming which means they need to do harvest after farming. After farming they celebrate. This day started becomes holiday and it became chuseok. During chuseok people shared their happiness with their family, friends and neighbor also they spend their time with people who is important to them.

Bulgogi, Kimchi and rice. There are many different kinds of traditional foods. Especially during chuseok there are many traditional foods. Soungpeon is one of most famous traditional food. Korean people made Soungpeon during chuseok and they share with their friends, family and neighbor. They put honey in dduck and cook.

Playing computer games, playing soccer, playing basketball, playing with my cousin, read a book and family trip. Those things are I did during chuseok. This chuseok was the most perfect chuseok during my life. I didn’t go to school for 9 days also I played so hard. I played with my friends; I visited my grandparent’s house, played with my cousin and family trip. This chuseok gave many things to our family, before this chuseok I don’t like my grandparent’s but I realized my grandparents are nice people also my family and I became closer.

Chuseok is the most important holiday in Korea. Before I wrote this essay, I thought chuseok is a just little bit more special than other days but after I wrote this essay, I realized chuseok is a meaningful holiday to Korean. Korean people should know meaning of chuseok and keep thinking about this traditional day.

Sunday

I woke up at 9 o'clock when I woke up I realized I need to start prepare go to chruch. I ate breakfast and go to chruch. When I arrived in chruch I was late 30 minutes therefore I need to sit in back, many high school were infront of me so I coudn't see pester. After church, I ate pizza with my friends. One of my friends paied. When I arrived in home I srated do my soical studay homework and played computer games. After play computer games I exercised for 45 minutes and I read a book for 45 minutes.

Today was a normal on Sunday. I think I enjoyed today, also I ready for tommorow. Today was a fun, interesting and excting day. I hope I can enjoy my life until end of my life.

I learned relax, before today I didn't know much about what is relax but I figured out meaning of relax and I will be a relax person.

9/29/07

Today, I woke up around at 10:30. I was trying to sleep more but one of my friend called me therefore I woke up. After that I read a book and than I played baksetball with my brother. I ate breakfast with my family and I started do my math homework. After I finished math homewrok I played starcraft and sudden attack with my friends. When I played Sudden attack I tried best but I coudn't beat my friends. However when I finished playing computer games, I listin music and wrote my election speach.

How do I feel?
Today, it was a okay day. Today I slept more than 10 hours. I don't know why, but I feel fantastic. However I took a lot of break but I am still tired because I didn't take a break for 4 days. I wiil take more break therefore I can concentrate on monday.

What can I learned from?
I learned many mathmetical things, when I studied algebra I realized new mathmatical stuff. I will memorize these things untile I die.

I am so tired!!

i am so tired!!! because, I went to KyungJo also I went to Lotte Word(today). I should be take a break today but my friends invited me so I went to Lotte Word and I met my korean school friends, Helena and my YISS friends when I came back to my house it was 9 o'clcok and I started to write my journal.

Today it was absolutely tired day, I think i need take a break and need some sleep. Also today it was a funny day. I spent a lot of time with my friends also it was fun.

When I felt tired i need take a break. When I arrived in home I got a terrible cold. I think I realized I need break when i felt tired.

9/27/07

Same as ester day, our family and my mom's friend family went to many different culture place. We ate breakfast in hotel and chidern did swimming. My parents said " Dayeon can you take care of them?" I was try to say no but I just agreed with my parents. The children was so annoying and hard to carrying. After that my parents back. We went to a mountain and rood motorcycle and I arrived in Seoul Station at 12 am.

Fun, Happiness, Exciting, tired.
When I road motorcycle it was really fantastic, fun and exciting. First time when I heard Kyung-Jo I thougt it is a boring place but I realized it is a fantastic place! I strongly recommed foring people have to vist Kyung-JO

Kyung Jo is a great place!! before I vistied JyungJo i thought it is a boring place but i realized it is a fantastic place.

9/26/07

Today I woke up at 6 o'clcok and I started to prepar to go Seoul Station. My family and my mom's friend family met in Seoul Statiom. We ate breakfast together and took train. After 4 hours we arrived in Gyung-Jo, when we arrived in Gyung-Jo we ate launch and we went to Bulguksa and a museum. I saw many Korean culture such as clothe, house, weapone and crown. After that my familt wemt to spa except me. When they came back, we wento to a resturant and ate itlian food. Aftert that we went to Norabang and back to hotel.

I was so tired also today was a great day! When I watched Korean civilization it was boring but when we went to norabang it was great and food was great aslo the pasta was fantastic!.


When we wathched Korean traditaional stuff, I was so boring therefore unfortuatelly I used bad words and I got in trouble. I think I should not used bad words infront of adult.

Dayeon Lee a busy day

Today, I woke up at 9 o'clock, after that I ate breakfast with my family. At 11 o'clcok I leave my house because I have meeting with Steven at 12 o'clock. At 12 o'clock I met Steven in Bundag. We made many posters. After that we played tennis, steven is way better than me but i just played for fun. Obviously I lost to Steven but it was preety fun. I learned tennis from steven and I imporoved a lot. After that I went to my home and ate dinner with my family and I will go to my gradnmother's house tommorw.

Today, It was pretty exciting day because I played with my firend instead of playing with my cousin and I am very happy because I finisehd all my homework and my poster. I hope our family trip will be fun, interesting and exciting.

If You need a help! than go ask to other people. When I was young I thought I am not aloud to ask question to other people but I realized asking a question to other poeple is good thing not a embarrassing thing. I think I should question therefor I can solve my curiously.

My favorite computer game is Starcraft. Every weekend I play Starcraft with my friends. Today, I played with 9th grade. I did Terren and he did prottos. We played 6 times. At first time, I lost because I made so many mistakes. Second time I beat him, third time I lost, fourth time I beat him, fifth time I lost and last I lost. I was best player in our school, but i became 2nd player. It was quite shocked because I thought I am the best. However I think I need more practice. After playing computer game with him I started practice. I will practice until I can beat that weird 9th grade kid.


I don’t know who is he but he gave me a huge shocked, I felt sort of stress and anger because I never thought I will lose to anybody. I am really sad and angry but I still beat twice and I am one year younger than him so if I do more practice I think I can be a best player. However I disappointed to my self.


Need more practice! I think I need more practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! I think people need to practice a lot when they achieve something important therefore conclusion is Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice!

Sunday

Today is on Sunday, Every on Sunday, I have to go church. At 9 am I arrived my home, usually church start at 9: 30 but I just leave earlier than usual day. However, when I arrived in church, some of church members are there. After 20 minutes people started come. After church I went to my home and started do my school homework, read a book and I did MSN.

Today it was a normal Sunday. I went to church, after church I went to my home and do my homework. I was bored today, also I was tired. That’s why I my journal is short and simple.

Today I was extremely tired because I was sick yesterday also I played so hardly and I worked so hard therefore I am extremely tired. I think I should take a break and take an enough sleep.

Um.............So sick

Yesterday, I didn’t sleep, because of that I got cold, I slept at 4 am because of nightmare I only slept 4 hours. When I woke up, I ate breakfast after that I played basketball with my brother. It was pretty easy because my brother is suck at basketball, before I played basketball I wasn’t that sick but after I played basketball with my brother. I got a horrible cold. When I tried to take a rest, Richard called me “Yo Dayeon do you want watch a movie with David, Damianous and me?” I was tired and sick but I want to watch movie therefore I went to movie tether. My friends and I watched “The Boum Ultimatum” the movie was great! After that I went to PC room, the PC room was clean also the internet was fantastic. My friends and leave Pc room around at 5 and I arrived in my home at 5 30.


Today, I felt two feelings. One is happiness, and the other one is painful. When I played with my friends I was happy and exited but after that I was extremely painful. I don’t know why but I had headache and stomached. I think I felt little bit better than a few hors ago.

I need a break, when I feel tired or sick! I realized I have to take a rest and need enough sleep. I though I am a super teenager but figured out that is not a true. I need a break. I think I need to learn how to control my self.

OH-Yeah!

Today is a free time! Today I got fall vacation, which means chusak vacation. However today it was my grandmother’s birth day. My family and my uncle’s family went to a restaurant and we did celebrate. I gave a small present for my grandmother. My grandma said thank you. Also I felt fantastic. After that I played computer games with my friends for 2 hours.

How do I feel?
Today I feel a fantastic; because we started fall vacation therefore I can play a lot. Also I don’t have much homework so I can enjoy my fall vacation and I am excited about meeting my cousins. Happy fall vacation!!!!!!!!!

What can I learned from?
After school I went to my grandmother’s birthday party after that I played computer game with my friends. When I returned to home, I realized I have to write a journal which is writing homework. I think I need to do homework first and play second

A busy day

Today, it was busy day. Today I woke up at 6:45, it was kind of late. Usually I woke up at around 6:20 because I woke 25 minutes late, I had to rush. When I rushed my mom saw that situation therefore I got a huge trouble because my mom hate being lazy. However, I arrived in school around at 7:55. I was almost late but I was lucky. When I went to Mr. Jacobsen’s class everyone was in class and they were preparing their class. After school I did after school activity (soccer practice) when I do soccer practice, Mr. Rimier said “ You guys have to pass to girl also you guys can’t shoot” I was pass to girls but they missed every single shout. The middle of the game, I gave up so I sub with other person. After that I went to my house, the traffic was so horrible so I arrived in my house around at 7 o’clock. When I arrived I started doing my homework also I am still doing my writing, reading homework.

How do I feel today?
Today, it was a horrible day because I started with trouble and I have a lot of homework to do. I think it will be a busy day and I probably can’t sleep today. I hope I can sleep today at least 8 hours.

What can I learned from?
I have to do homework!!, I act like a crazy person because I had so many homework. I think I should finish my homework really quickly and go to bed. I think we don’t need homework!!

A boring day^^`

Like yesterday, today it was raining. When I opened my eyes I saw exactly same situation as yesterday. The trees are shaking, also because of raining the air was moisture. My house is in top of Bukhan Mountain, therefore when I get out of my house, I always get a big breath. Today I tried that but I felt quit different with the other day. However, I leave my house around at 6: 30 and I arrived to school around at 7:50. After that I went to my homeroom. Time passed, and school end. Also today, the traffic was horrible therefore I arrived at 5:00. when I arrived, I started do my homework such as reading homework, writing homework and reading homework.

How do I feel?
Today, I was boring and sleepy because most of subject on Wednesday are boring ,except for writing class ^^ . also today, it was raining therefore I couldn’t play basketball with my cousin ( after school) however because of raining I can study hard.

What can I learned from?
Until yesterday, I thought rain is trash and useful thing in our life but I realized rain is important to human but I hope rain it stop! I can’t to do anything because of raining.

Let it rain!

Today, it was a rainy day. When I opened my eyes and I watched the window. I can see a heavy raining and a horrible wind. The wind was strong like a Hercules, the trees were shaking, and the doors were vibrating like a crazy cow. When I get out of my house, I felt a force also the rain and wind was so heavy therefore I couldn’t stand. However I took car and I leave my house. I arrived in school around at 7: 55. After I arrived in school I went to Mr. Jacobsen’s class. He went to India four days ago but he came back to our school. I was kind of happy but I also felt strange, I felt the lack. However I was glad that Mr. Jacobsen’s and the other teachers back. The school was pretty fun and I decided to attend to student counseling. After school I did after school activity. Most of soccer player thought we don’t have soccer practice because it was raining like a crazy. I leave school around at 4:50. I arrived in my home at 6 o’ clock. After that I ate dinner, the dinner was Korean food. I started to do my school assignment and I read a book.


How do I feel?
Toady, I was tired because the weather wasn’t that great also I had tons of homework. Also I argue with my mom, therefore my mom wasn’t good mood. I hope it’s not raining so I can play during launch time and improve my social relationship.

What can I learned from?
When I realized it was raining out side, I was quit peaces up but when I think about raining, I figure out it is good for our ecology system. Also when I contrasted between environment and my life I realized human need to time of pain because it cleans our wrong situation.

Oh happy day~

Oh happy day!
I woke up around at 6 o’clock, when I woke up I started to prepare to go to school, at 6:30 I leave my house, also I saw A bus in the highway, one of my friend tried to say “hi” to me nut I ignored him, because I was tired and sleepy. However classes and I ate launch with my friends and I went to two different classes. Today was a lucky day because today I don’t have homework. When I arrived at home I checked my homework note, when I check my homework note I saw a empty note. I was surprised and I couldn’t believe my self therefore I asked to one of my classmate and she said “ um I think we don’t have homework” I was really happy. I started to read a book. I read a book for 45 minutes. After that I started playing computer game which is star craft.

How do I feel?
Today it was fantastic and great! I hope I can have this kind of day, until ends of my life but it was a lucky day. However today it gave me energy.

What can I learned from?
Today I realized how my characteristic is challenging and variety. When I had a lot of homework, I always shouted and mumbling but today I wasn’t like that. I think I supposed to change my personality

9/16/07

9/16/07
Today, I woke up around at 8: 40, when I woke up I ate breakfast and breakfast was terrible, suddenly I shouted to my maid, after I shouted I apologized to her and went to church. I arrived on church at 9: 35. When I arrived at church I was late, so I just sit and I worshiped to God. After church end, I went to my friend house, my friend and I went to pc room, norabang also we went a pasta restaurant. After I finished eating I went to my home. When I arrived to my house it was 2 o’ clock, I started doing my reading homework, writing homework, math homework and social study homework. Also I will read a book.

How do I feel ?
Today it was little batter than a usual day but it was almost same as the other Sunday. I am tired my boring and usually life. I think I need something special in my life. My usual day is boring and frustrated, I always do same things such as go to school, do my homework, read a book, played computer game and go to sleep. I hope something special events come to my life so I can enjoy that situation.

What can I learned from this happen?
I apologized to my maid but I still feel sorry for her, I wasn’t mean to but I think I was extremely rood to her. I think I should be nice to her and respect her.

9/14/07

What Happened?

I work up at around 6:30 because my house is in Seoul so I have to wake up around at 6’00. When I arrived at Mr. Jacobsen’s class nobody were in class, I was supposed to go to Mr. Curry’s class but I forgot that. so I was confused, however some how I went to Mr.Curry's room. When I arrived at his class everyone were there except Joon. We saw a video that about Terry fox, after we saw a video Mr. Curry asked a quesstion, my friedns and I tried to make fun of him and suddenly he started shouted to us, however it was a pteey fun. After homerook I went to Health class, Mr. Rimer wasn't threre so our class went to Mr.Martinz class. I did health project, it was preety easy but the class was boring, after health I went to Korean class, Damiano and I always make fun of our teacher during Korean class. After Korean I went to reading class, there were no our teacher so Mrs.Jean came to our room, this reading class was a most fun and interesting reading class in my life. After I finisehd school my friends and I went to Bundang for play. We went to Pc room, KFC, icecream market and norabang. Steven and I got a highest score in norabang, however I came back to my house at 10 o' clock. When I arrived at my home I ate a chicken.

How do I feel?
Today was a excting day becuase some of class doesn't have teachers because they went to India, because of that substitute teachers came to classess. Some of our substitute teachers doesn't know about what we have to be done also after school I played with my friends. However today is on Friday, which mean I can play without doing my homework except my writting homework. However today it was a exciting day.

what can I learned form?
Today, I learned a promise thing. My mom and I did promised but I didn't accept that promise so I was getting trouble. I realized promise(bargain) beteween people are important.