Sunday, February 24, 2008
pg 126~158
in this chapter
america and Japan fought
this war was a big war in this book
many Japanese died
some code talker died
and he letter to his parents
i can feel how bad is war
135~140
there is no important thing.
their just taking break
141~158
in this chapter the setting is Guam
this chapter is the most emotional part in this book
in the book there is a boy who lost their entire family.
also he lost his najajo's friend.
Thursday, February 21, 2008
Code Talker pg 68~98
he graduate high school.
few navajos people start to learn about code ( secret)
they became code talker.
pg 75 ~84
they realized how importace is their job
he master code, he became code talker
he is glad to speak navajo
he is very glad that he is not american
pg 85~94
he moved to hawai
he became friendly with his the other code talker
pg 95~98
he learned about eneimy
Wednesday, February 20, 2008
Code Talker pg 50~68
he got permison from his parents
He got blesed by a man.
pg 57~68
instead of going to school he went to Marine corps office with his parents.
he became a marine
he is making friendships with the other people.
Code Talker pg 13~50
The boarding school is not close to his house.
Navajo people's are not aloude to speak their own language
there is one man who is american ( who can't spaek navajo well) - their English teacher.
there is a man who is navajo with shorty hair ( who can speack navajo well) Mr. Jacob Benally
He became friends with the other navajo.
pg 19~ 22
they reamae navajo's last neam.
pg 23 ~ 27
Tradition is the enemy of progress
when navajo's speak a language execpt English the teacher punis them.
they treid to speak english only when the adults were near them
pg 28~32
he became a hight school student
he started to studied japanese histroy and geography
pg 33~37
he tooks a special interest in japan
Japan invade United States
pg 38~ 44
United States wants to navajo's people help them
pg 45~50
29 men aplicated for marine
the main charter wants to aplicated but he was to young.
Monday, February 18, 2008
group book ( i forgot the title)
chapter 1
setting
it is japan
there is a family, their first son has to go American school
the familes are navajo ( navtie people)
their fist son and his uncle leave their house.
Wednesday, February 13, 2008
Elements of story and Elements of Book report ( comparing and contrasting)


Exposition: introduces setting, character, POV, & major conflict; the background information is presented
Protagonist: the main character in fiction
Antagonist: the character or force that blocks the main character
Setting: the time and place the story occurs
complicated by the minor conflicts
within the story’s frame

Sunday, February 10, 2008
The little prince
When i was second grade i read this book, ( it was korean) however , that time it was a common book and it was first time to read the little prince. After few years, wehn i became middle school student, i read this book, that time i had to read this book because it was homework.
Today, i read the little prince in english, the book was not hard also it was fresh however
this is basic plot of this story;
the little prince is the main character of this book, actually there is one more main charcter, it is 'me', which is plot, he is telling the story. in this story, he is a plot and becuase of airplane crack, he lost his way in dessert. he met the little prince, and the little princess started to talk about his trip.
2/10 last day of lunar vacation.
Today, i am extremly tired because i slept 3 hours. i think i will sleep a lot today therefore i could charge my energy.
i learned....................................................................................................................................................................................................................... nothing ......
2/9 the 8th habitat pg 25~57
our first brith gift; the freedom to choose
our second brith gift; natural laws or principlies
our thrid brith gift; the four intelligences / capacities of our nautre.
- mental intelligence
- phycical intelligence
- emotional intelligence
- spriitual intelligence
Saturday, February 9, 2008
2/9
Today, i almost killed my sister. I was really frustrated and sad. It was super super unusual day, also it drives me crazy. i hope my sister give money to me so i can fix it.
I realized my sister is a kid, my sister is 13 years old and she is good at study therefore i thought my sister is an adult but, know on i will treat my sister as a little kid.
Friday, February 8, 2008
a part of the catcher in the rye and a part of the 8th habit
the elevater boy and sunny took the othe 5 dollors from him. He, met his old friends and date with her. Also he went to his house to see his sister but his parents came back to house therefore he just ran away.
the 8th habit.
this book has no story, the book is telling the skill of being success. i only read until chapter 3 but it's really good book.
in chapter 1
it's talking about pain, when people get in a dificult situation, they always think in negetive way. in this book its trying to tell about how people should reacts when they feel pain.
in capter 2
it is talking about problems, and showing some examples, the examples was 5 ages of civilization's voice. however its telling about how problem solving is important.
in chapter 3
it talk about solution
2/8
I will never go to cosco again, usually there are not many people near cosco but today it was horible. When i need to go cosco than i will not go take my own car, i will take taxi or i will walk.
Today was a usual day, i didn't do any speical thing also i didn;t earn any moeny. It was little bit boring, but it wasn't really bad. Tommorow i might have fun with my friends.
Thursday, February 7, 2008
2/7
When I was young, i hate my cousins family, because they were so many people also it was comfrotable to me, but i realized if i have many families members than i could earn more money. tommorow i might go to the other people, because of my dad and mom is youngest child in their family. our family should go to our cousin.
Today, was quite busy day for our family but my emotion was really highper, because everyday i earn tons of moeny.
the catcher in the rye 1~10
he got kicked out from pency because he failed 3 subjects
he went to mr, mrs spencers house.
after christmas vacation he can't come back to school.
his parents don't know that he got kicked out from school
he met bellboy in the elevator and he bargain with him that bellboy will send a young pretty prosistude.
he was scard of doing sex with prosistude.
he tried to do conversation with her but she doesn't want to has converswation with him
a prosistude and a bell boy trick him.
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
2/6
today , it was the most happy day in 2008 because i got a lot of moeny. I think tommorw will be more happy day for me. I wiil get more moeny from my the other civiling.
I realized my uncle love to give money to therir lovely nepew.
Wizard of oz
accedently Dorothy killed a bad which with her house.
she got sliver shoes from a which
Dorothy, she wants to go back to her home but she coudn't because there is no way to go home.
she decided to go home.
she met scarecrow
she met Tin woodman
she met cowardly lion
thoses three characters want to get something, therefore they decied to follow dorothy.
they met wizard of oz
oz, suggest them to kill a bad which.
they decied to kill a bad which
a which has golden hat she used golden hat
dorothy killed a bad which with water
they decided oz is not really almighty.
oz gave brain, heart and courage to lion, woodman and scarecrow.
the oz made hot air ballon but because of her dog, she coudn't go with oz
Dorothy used silver shoes to go home.
2/5
I came back to my home. I slept 19 hours; I was very tired therefore I slept a lot. When came back to home I went to straight to my bed and I slept. I was so tired therefore I only slept.
Seriously, I didn’t do anything, I only slept.
2/4
It was second day of snow boarding. My friends and I woke up at 9 o’clock. We tried to do board but we were really tired therefore we decided to play little bit latter. We started to do ski at 12 o’clock. I was really tired but some reason I bought ticket. My body was really tired, I was trying to do trick but I flailed so many times therefore I just stop to doing trick. We ate galbetang for dinner also we order chicken at the night. However at night we played like a crazy! We were out of control. We slept at 3 o clock.
I was extremely tired, I need to break I think I should take break when I go to home. However it was really fun.
I almost master 360, when I went to ski, I don’t even know jump but after 2 days I master 360.
2/3
I woke up at 5 o’clock. I took shower and went to Young pang resort. In Young pang I met; Peter, Steven, Richard, Damiano, Brian, Ryan, Joseph and Jason. In first Joseph hearts his leg therefore he couldn’t do snow board. Peter and Jason were really good at ski and board. We went to longest and hardest slope in young pang. When we finished riding snow board we ate dinner. After that we played balling Ryan and Jason was really good their score was almost 250. However the first day of Young pang was really fun.
Every winter I played snow board with my friends. Snow board is one of my favorite sports. I am not really good as Jason or peter but I can still enjoy. However it was really fun and interesting day for me.
Jason told me new skill, I will practice more and someday I will become better than Jason.
2/2
On February 1st I went to Tae an and it was really tired. When I woke up it was 5 pm. I was really surprised. I started to prepare to go to ski. I put ski clothe, glove and extra clothe. After that I slept again
On February 1st I didn’t do anything. I felt really lazy.
On February 1st I didn’t do anything
2/1
I hope more people go to Tae an and helped people who lost their hope. I hope the people find their hope and work hard.
I realized there are many people who lost their hope and future I will study hard, when I become successful person, I will help them.
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
january 31
After school, our family went to V I P S. we ate many delicious food and his birthday cake. Also the staff sang for my brother, we took a photo. After eating food our family went to sin sae gae department. Each of our family members bought a present for my brother. My father bought a close for him, my bought an enormous Lego, my sister bought a Yo-Gi-Oh card and I bought a Nintendo game pack. When we arrived in to home my brother started to build Lego after he finished building Lego he played Nintendo. However it was really good birthday.
Today was best day in this year, because it was last day of school, also it was my lovely brother’s birthday. My brother made our family united and very happy. Especially I was very glad because I ate so many delicious foods. I hope my birthday party is better than my brother.
Next year I will collect more money and buy more cool and fancy present to my brother.
Friday, January 25, 2008
Who moved my chese.
The begining of the this book, it starts with coversation between a student and his classmates and he started to tell about a short story.
There were two liitle boy and two mice. The two young little boy has compilx and smart brain and two mice has simple brain. The setting of this stroy is chese station c. In chese station c there were enough chese to eat. Every day Ham, Hen and two mice, ate chese and brought chese to their home. One day, the chese is gone. The two mice, decided to find new chese therefore they start to find new chese station. When two liittle boy, notice the entire chese is gone, they started to argue about that, they should leave chese station. Hem decieded to leave chese station and find new chese station, but Ham decided to stay in chese c. Few days ago Hem found new chese station, it was more wealthy and cool. He brought his friend and decided to leave in new chese station. When he arrived in chese station he found that two mice, who leave earler.
Monday, January 21, 2008
How do you feel on a snow day?

Friday, January 18, 2008
Winter Vacation
All the vacation gave good memorie excpet this vacation, this vacation was horrifying and paintfull to me. When the vacation started, I went to a Hakwon to take test. I took a reading and writting test. The test was almost same as our school Ac system, I read a paragraph and answered few questions. After fiew minutes the computer gave me the score. It was pretty bad, therefore I decided to study really hard during vacation. I studied with Jospeh and Steven. The Vacation was very boring and tired.
During Vacation I read many books, I tried to memorize a lot of vocaburaly words but i realized it is a usless thing therefore i read a lot.
The vacation was really boring, only thing that i did was reading. i hope i can have a better vacation next time.
Sunday, November 25, 2007
Snow board is a great sports. I think it was a great day, because it was really fun, exciting and interesting.
I figrued out a new skills, I can trun 720, with rushing.
Sunday, November 18, 2007
Democracies have freedom! Imagine that people have to live in a certain area and they are not aloud to do anything if government do not aloud them to do, how terrible is it!? Democracy countries provide freedom to people, also they can buy their own house, car, and they can earn their own money, but in communism country they are not aloud to keep their own car, house or money. Citizen of democracy can do whatever thing if it is legal and right thing. This is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.
If you want to be different with the other people than you should be in democracy. If you are hard worker or do extra work than you might become successful person also you can have your own money therefore you can be a rich person, but in the communism country no matter what you did, you have to get same amount of money with person who didn’t work hard, how unfair is it?, if you want be different with the other people than you should go to democracy country, you can be successful and be a rich person.
A few hundreds years ago many countries were suffered because of war, but in democracy country you don’t have to worry about, people who live in democracy country, they are safe and government protect citizen, but people who live in communism they always have to worry about their security also the government do no care about their citizen’s safety, this is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.
Like what you read in this essay, democracy is better than communism because they have freedom, better economic and last it has peace.
Saturday, November 17, 2007
APM!
Today, was a great day because I bought many clothe and it is really chip. I think today was one of the most happy day in my life.
I though dongdamon is really bad place but i realized it is good place to us.
Sunday, November 11, 2007
second draft
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee
Many people think World War 2 is a huge, complicate, violence and useless war during world his story but World War two gave huge effects to world. In 1939, September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. This result gives many effects to world but! what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.
This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.
If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.
German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons but! They are not winner of World War 2, Germany is loser of World War 2, middle of world war 2, many country thought German will winner of World War2 but, it didn’t go like that, during attacking Russia, many German soldier died because of weather. It was very cold therefore the weapons were not working. What if German is winner of World War 2 than it will give a huge effect to world. If German beat United States and the other European countries than World common language will be change to German because people want to learn and know, about strongest world language. Second many country will be communism country not democracy country, if a lot of countries are communism than It will give many unbenefit things to world economic.
There is many way to change history or other complicated happen, like what I said in this essay, there is many way to change result of World War 2. First, if Japan is winner of World War 2 or if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb than probably it will change whole history of world. Also if German is winner of World War 2 than it also change whole world history.
sundy!!!

Saturday, November 10, 2007
Today, it was boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! day....................................... I hope I can have a better life tommorow.
Today, I dind't learn anything................
Friday, November 9, 2007

I came to GSIS last September and in this school there is Award things, Last year I didn't get any awards but today I got writing award, Mr. Fambro called my name and Miss. Brown gave me award thing. When I get award thing everyone were surprised.
Today, I am really good mood ^^, I will work hard and I will get many awards thing next semester but I have to go to Hakwon in English therefore I think my mood will be go don.
I realized that if I worked hard than, I will get pice.
Wednesday, November 7, 2007
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee
Many people think World War 2 is a huge and complicated war during world his story but World War two is giving huge effect to world. 1939. September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. These results give many effects to world but what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.
This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.
If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.
German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons.
World War 2 is giving huge effect, probably it is biggest war.
Sunday, November 4, 2007
Sunday

Friday

Today, it was really fun day, because us four played in Bundang and Steven, and I slept in peter's house with peter. However it was real fantastic day.
I learned world war 2 in Hakwon, we use to discuss about one sepesific topic but we learned about World war 2
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The three most important relationships that a student has.
Imagine that you are the only person in the world. There is no person beside you, no animals beside you, or no plants beside you. Nothing is beside you. How terrible it is? In human life the most important thing is relationship, without relation people can not communicate with other people. While, students think relationship is a very important thing to them also relationship give many effect to their life. There are three most important relationships that a student has; first it is relationship between their families such as their parents. Second, relationship between their friends. Third, relationship between their pet. These three things are the most important things in their life.
“You have to do what I am saying! You have obeyed to me” this is what most parents say to their children. There are two kinds of relationships between parents and their children. First they have great relationships, they have meaningful conversation between each other also they can understand their emotion. If they have great relation ship than the children will learn many things form their parents such as, good social relationships and how to respect elder people. Second there are horrible relationships between parents and children. They can not understand each other and they don’t want to have conversation with each other. If they have bad relationship than they are not learn good mantle society and they will not know what respect is. In addition a relationship between parents and their children is important thing.
Your friends can give a huge effect to our life. When you have great friends than he or she will give you many benefit things to you, such as when you choose a wrong choice than they will help and give an advice to you. When you tried to smoke they will try to stop you. If you have bad friends they will give you bad effect to you, such as they will recommend bad thing to you such as smoking, drugging and the other things. Also they will give you bad opportunity to you.
After school you went to your lovely home and there are no parents or brother or sister. There is a quite tiny dog is looking for you and trying to play with you. These days, people do not like dog but pets are really huge part to students. When they feel loneliness or pain, most teenagers doesn’t want to share their feeling with their parents or friends. If they don’t express their feeling than probably they will feel strong pain and they will get huge amount of stress. If they have a pet than they can express or telling their feeling to their pet. The pets are the most believable thing in earth. Human can be trade but pets never be trade human.
Like what I said, relationships are very important to people. It gives many effects to people. When you are student those relationships are giving a huge effect to student’s life. Relationships between parents are the most important relationship. Second, relationship between their friends this relationships are second important relationship to students. Last, relationships between their pets. Also students have to make great relationships between their family (parents), friends and their pet.
Saturday, November 3, 2007
SFS( Soccer)
S, there were no friends in bus because, all my friends are morning team or there are using their car therefore I listing music for 1 and half hours. However when I arrive in SFS, I was really sick therefore I couldn't run propery. After one game, our team played with IIS, I made thee goals in this game therefore our team beat IIS after that we played KIS team1 we lost really badly, I was really frustrated because they were extremly rood, however next game we played with KIS team2 it was tied and this game was okay.Today, I am very frustrated because of some of stupid KIS students, Also we lost w games and my condition was not great because of those reason I am very bad mood.
I realized and I learned that KIS kids are stupid, next time when I meet KIS kids probably i will just ignored them
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Dayeon lee first draft ~!
The three most important relationships that a student has.
Imagine that you are the only person in the world. There is no person beside you, no animals beside you, or no plants beside you. Nothing is beside you. How terrible it is? In human life the most important thing is relationship, without relation people can not communicate with other people. While, students think relationship is a very important thing to them also relationship give many effect to their life. There are three most important relationships that a student has; first it is relationship between their family such as their parents. Second, relationship between their friends. Third, relationship between their pet. These three things are the most important things in their life.
“You have to do what I am saying! You have obeyed to me” this is what most parents say to their children. There are two kinds of relationships between parents and their children. First they have great relationships, they have meaningful conversation between each other also they can understand their emotion. If they have great relation ship than the children will learn many things form their parents such as, good social relationships and how to respect elder people. Second there are horrible relationships between parents and children. They can not understand each other and they don’t want to have conversation with each other. If they have bad relationship than they are not learn good mantle society and they will not know what respect is. In addition a relationship between parents and their children is important thing.
Your friends can give a huge effect to our life. When you have great friends than he or she will give you many benefit things to you, such as when you choose a wrong choice than they will help and give an advice to you. When you tried to smoke they will try to stop you. If you have bad friends they will give you bad effect to you, such as they will recommend bad thing to you such as smoking, drugging and the other things. Also they will give you bad opportunity to you.
After school you went to your lovely home and there are no parents or brother or sister. There is a quite tiny dog is looking for you and trying to play with you. These days, people do not like dog but pets are really huge part to students. When they feel loneliness or pain, most teenagers doesn’t want to share their feeling with their parents or friends. If they don’t express their feeling than probably they will feel strong pain and they will get huge amount of stress. If they have a pet than they can express or telling their feeling to their pet. The pets are the most believable thing in earth. Human can be trade but pets never be trade human.
Like what I said, relationships are very important to people. It gives many effects to people. Also students have to make great relationships between their family (parents), friends and their pet
Sunday, October 28, 2007
nd I studied little bit for math and reading because i will take a test. After that my family and I went to a resturant and ate the food .Saturday, October 27, 2007
Writing 8th
Mr. Fambro
First draft
When I saw his music video or listing music I can feel, powerful, enjoyable, Flexible, rhythmical and surprised. Most people think Hip Hop and R&B is for man but theses day it is silently changing. A few years ago a woman entrance on the stage. Ciara Princess Harris, she was born is October 25, 1985. In the summer of 2004 she m
ade hit song its call “Goodies” the second album was Ciara: The Evolution, was released in December 2006. There were few hit songs “get up” “promise” these two songs are represent her. The album has sold nearly sold two millions.She was born in Austin, Taxes. She is the only child in her home. She grew up in army base in the other countries such as Germany, New York, California and the other cities. She has a great personality therefore she did adjustment very well; also she is a great leader. During her teens Ciara and her family lived in Atlanta. When she was young she loved to listening to the music and dancing with her friends. She was not good at subjects that need study. However Ciara joined Hearsay and worked on her songwriting. The group was not match with Ciara therefore eventually she left the group. Ciara graduated high school that is in United States, she began to make a song and her first album was “Yeah” After that her song “Goodies” this song is the most popular song in United States and United Kingdom also the albums were selling 2.63 million. “Goodies” is world hit song many people in world know about this song. There are many hit songs and albums. In 2005 Ciara made DVD that include her Music video such as documents, “Goodies, Missy Elliott's "Lose Control" from her album The Cookbook and Bow Wow’s "Like You" from his album Wanted. In 2006, Ciara started a new year by winning her first Germany Award for Missy Elliott's "Lose Control". After that she made second single album, that album was selling in many different European country including United Kingdom. There are many albums and most of those album songs are hit songs. Also she has concerts in Asia. Ciara is a famous world star and she has many concerts in Asia, America and Europe.
Her song and albums: "Goodies" ,Missy Elliott, Oh, Goodies: The Videos & More, So What" All You've Got, Get Up "Promise Ring." "That's Right “Goodies is a song written by American singer Ciara Harris. It was first album to Ciara and this was a hit song and because of this song many people in the world started know about Ciara. “Get up” is a song written by Ciara Harris, Hakeem Seriki, and Phalon Alexander. It was a dance song also it showed romantic either. This was second album for Ciara and it was first album in 2006. “Get up” is remake of "Somebody's Watching Me” this album was also hit album. Many European and Americans were buying this album. In this song, two girls were dancing in the club but without speaking they can understand their feeling and they can conversation with out talking. “ so what is her third album.
Chart (2006)
Peakposition
U.S. Billboard Hot 100
10
U.S. Billboard R&B/Hip Hop Songs
4
U.S. Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Singles Sales
23
U.S. Billboard Hot Rap Tracks
3
U.S. Billboard Pop 100
13
Australian ARIA Charts
40
UK Top 75 Singles
56
She is a top R&B and Hip hop star she worked really hard, she is an intelligent woman but she worked really hard. First when she have concert she practice for many times. The practice time was longer than sleeping time. It means she worked really hard. I think when we want to achieve or success a goal than we need a lot of practice. Also the amount of practicing can change the result.
Second, when she concentrates none of um can’t disturb her. I think this concentration is the most important and giving a huge effect. When we concentrate we can do anything with putting small effort.
Before I do this essay, I thought Ciara is a normal singer just like the other one but I realized she is a different singer with the other singer. I strongly recommend that people who like hip hop or R&B, they should listen her songs. She is a favorite and famous world star. She has a lot of hit songs and she is a hard worker.
late work
Thrill!!!!! . Today was the most unlucky day because we met highschool students also I felt little bir of scard
I think I should not play in Bundang anymore also I need to pratice of runnning.
I am very tired because I should sleep more than 12 hours but I coudnt therefore I am very tired and Sleepy. I hope I can sleep more than 20 hours tomrow. However today was a great day because I could watch the soccer game and I ate Korean tradtional food.
I figured out new soccer skills, it was based on prosoccer player's skills but it gave a great feeling to me. Also I realized there are many couple in this school.
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
first draft
Writing 8th
Mr. Fambro
First draft
When I saw his music video or listing music I can feel, powerful, enjoyable, Flexible, rhythmical and surprised. Most people think Hip Hop and R&B is for man but theses day it is silently changing. A few years ago a woman entrance on the stage. Ciara Princess Harris, she was born is October 25, 1985. In the summer of 2004 she made hit song its call “Goodies” the second album was Ciara: The Evolution, was released in December 2006. There were few hit songs “get up” “promise” these two songs are represent her. The album has sold nearly sold two millions.
She was born in Austin, Taxes. She is the only child in her home. She grew up in army base in the other countries such as Germany, New York, California and the other cities. She has a great personality therefore she did adjustment very well; also she is a great leader. During her teens Ciara and her family lived in Atlanta. When she was young she loved to listening to the music and dancing with her friends. She was not good at subjects that need study. However Ciara joined Hearsay and worked on her songwriting. The group was not match with Ciara therefore eventually she left the group. Ciara graduated high school that is in United States, she began to make a song and her first album was “Yeah” After that her song “Goodies” this song is the most popular song in United States and United Kingdom also the albums were selling 2.63 million. “Goodies” is world hit song many people in world know about this song. There are many hit songs and albums. In 2005 Ciara made DVD that include her Music video such as documents, “Goodies, Missy Elliott's "Lose Control" from her album The Cookbook and Bow Wow’s "Like You" from his album Wanted. In 2006, Ciara started a new year by winning her first Germany Award for Missy Elliott's "Lose Control". After that she made second single album, that album was selling in many different European country including United Kingdom. There are many albums and most of those album songs are hit songs. Also she has concerts in Asia. Ciara is a famous world star and she has many concerts in Asia, America and Europe.
Her song and albums: "Goodies" ,Missy Elliott, Oh, Goodies: The Videos & More, So What" All You've Got, Get Up "Promise Ring." "That's Right (I will explain these songs also tell specific things people’s feeling)
She is a top R&B and Hip hop star she worked really hard, she is an intelligent woman but she worked really hard. First…………………..
Second…………………….
Third……………
Before I do this essay, I thought Ciara is a normal singer just like the other one but I realized she is a different singer with the other singer. I strongly recommend that people who like hip hop or R&B, they should listen her songs. She is a favorite and famous world star. She has a lot of hit songs and she is a hard worker.
Sunday, October 21, 2007
Final draft
Writing8
Mr.Fambro class
Written by Dayeon Lee
Final draft
South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice the government is not aloud to make a decision what ever they want to do. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.
North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea has a strong economic power therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore South Korea can help North Korea with technology. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. In communism country there is no individual property therefore most people do not want to do hard work because no matter what they will get same amount of money, food, and territory with people who doesn’t work hard. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore their economic can improve and South Korea has to teach about effort. (Without effort we can’t achieve anything)
In 21 century, money and authority is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. Imagine how great North and South Korea can work together. When I read this article I was quite shocked because I never thought North and South Korea will work with same time or helping each other. In the article it said, South Korea is making a road that connecting North Korea and South Korea. It is a meaningful thing because it means North Korea want to communicate and open their mind with South Korea. People can eat food one hand but it is hard to eat, people can walk with one foot but it is hard do to walk and people can’ live with half heart. Korea is divided in two countries. It means they lost their half part of body. Imagine we are don’t have half part of body it is terrible and it is uncomfortable. It give many effect to both side.
If South Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. People in the world they know Korean people are very brilliant and intelligent. Also they think North Korea is one of powerful country in the world. Second Korea will give many effects to world economic because South Korea has great technologies but the companies have to pay a lot of money to worker but North Korea doesn’t have great technology but they have chip and strong worker. Third, if Korea and North Korea unified than there is no divided country in the world. Also there is no communism country in the world, it is related with peace. North Korea is one of the most harmful and dangerous country in the world. It will keep world peace. It will give many effects to world economic and the other things. They should find their half part and have to improve many things.
Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve something that is important than we should do hard work and put a lot of effort to that specific situation. . North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve. Both Korea is putting effort and they are communicating each other. Also like what said in article, if those projects are complete and successful than it is coming closer to unified.
Extra feeling, extra opinion
Before I read and write about this article I thought North Korea is a uneducated and wild country because in the news and the other country said North Korea is the most harmful and dangerous country in the world therefore I thought North Korea is not okay country even people who were in North Korea and I had same ancestor. After reading and writing about this article I realized we need to figure out how family is important.
saturday
It was quite surprised because all my friends changed totally. First time it was really quite but after 20 minutes we started to talk and play. However it was fantastic and cool.
I got many phone number, i got many pretty? girl phone number, it was a great day.
late work :
I think I need to talk a lot when teacher asked me questions to me. If I answer many questions when teacher ask me than i will improve a lot.
Martin Luthor was a great leader. I read his speach today, before I read his speach I thought his speach is a normal speach like the other one but I realized his speach is a special speach. He don't want to use violence to US citizen, he was a great leader.
Tuesday, October 16, 2007
first draft
South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.
North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea have a better economic therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore they can help with this. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore they can have similar mind with us.
In 21 century, money and power is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. …………………
If Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. When they become one county. Second …………………….
Third…………………….
Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve, North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve.
Friday, October 12, 2007
I wasn't that good mood today because I had detention instead of fun firday. I hope I can have better day. Also I am very tired today. I will eat Lamean and watch Tv.
I think I should not use bad words. Also I will learn meaning of Lup and I will keep that polocy.
Thursday, October 11, 2007
10-11-07
Today, soccer pratice was kind of special. At first game it was normal soccer practice but in second game, it was totally different with normal pratice. We played Sam's team and we scored 5 times. The score was 5:0, when score became 5:0 Mr. Martinaz put Steven, Mathew, Mr.Lee and the all the player. it was 14 vs 7 but the score was 5:0. I realized and we prove that our soccer team is best team in Gsis.
Today, it was fantastic! because we beat steven's team and Sam's team. Also I bought new clothe in Lotte department^^. I think today is the best day in this mounth. I hope I can have this kind of day until I die.
Team work is the most important thing, when we play soccer. Also team work is important thing in our life. Nomatter what is it and how good is it.
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
10/10/07
that I played soccer. The game was 8th vs 7th and 9th grade. The score was 3:3.Today it was an easy day because I took test which is not involve in out grade. I played soccer, also I had easy subject today but I am tired becasue I have so many homework.
I figured out new soccer skill!!! Steven and Peter, they both have shooting skill but I wasn't but I figured out skill also my driball was best(?) I think I can do better job.
Tuesday, October 9, 2007
test day.
ct our school grade therefore I decided to do my best. At first I took an easy math test and after that I took a little bit harder one. After math test I took writting test.At first, I was nervous because I thought this test will give a lot of effect to our grade but after this test is not affecting to our grade therefore I started to take a test with less pressure. However I was great because I made three goals during soccer practice.
I think I need work hard and read more book because when I wrote a story and correct my writting it was really bad therefore I think I need study harder.
Thursday, October 4, 2007
10-4-07
don't help ofender. I am the team captain, I will mkae our team a strongest team in our school and international school. Also we lost to Joon's team. I think we should learn about team work.I was kind of angery today because I lost to Joon's team also I have a lot of homework, also I am very tired because I played soccer and after soccer I ride car for 1 and half hour. I think I should take a break and go to sleep.
Team work is the most important thing in soccer or the other sports. Before today I tought we don't need teamwork if we have good skills but I realized we need good team work, we wiill work with team and we will be a best team in GSIS
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
10-3-07

Today is a national foundation day of Korea. BC 2333, Danggun made a Korea. I dind't Know that toaday is national foundayion day of Korea but I realized during Korean class. I lerned about national foundayion day of Korea, and I read a mythlogoy about this day. In this book, thaey said Hwang wong and Danggun made rules and that is devotion to the welfare of humanitarianism. I realized today is a most important day in Korea therefore, I bought a Korean flag and I put in my house. Today was a meaningful day.
Today, I was kind of frustrated because my teachers gave a bunch of homework also I fought with my sister. Also I am very tired because I went to bed at 10 o' clock and I woke up at 4 o' clock.
I learned what is national foundation day of Korea and who is Ddanggun, Hwangwong. Before Korean class I didn't know much about national foundation day of Korea and these two people but I learned who are they and national foundation day of Korea.
Tuesday, October 2, 2007
10-2-07

Today, I was really tired becuase I slept only 7 hours and I played soccer. I think our school have give small amount of homework to us, so we can enjoy our life and can play with our friends.
I learn , new math skills and china history. It was hard but I am glad at learning.
Monday, October 1, 2007
10-1-07

Today was a great day! Today is on October and I don't have homework^^. I think my life should be like this until I die. If my life is like this unil I die, I think I wiill be a succesful and happy person.
I learned, new mathmatical things. Rational numbers, irrational number....... however I learned many new things.
Chuseok

Chuseok……..is one of the most important day in Korea but many Korean people don’t know, why Chuseok is so important to us. Korean people just celebrate and have fun with their family but, we need to know about why chuseok is important to us. A long time ago many Korean people did farming which means they need to do harvest after farming. After farming they celebrate. This day started becomes holiday and it became chuseok. During chuseok people shared their happiness with their family, friends and neighbor also they spend their time with people who is important to them.
Bulgogi, Kimchi and rice. There are many different kinds of traditional foods. Especially during chuseok there are many traditional foods. Soungpeon is one of most famous traditional food. Korean people made Soungpeon during chuseok and they share with their friends, family and neighbor. They put honey in dduck and cook.
Playing computer games, playing soccer, playing basketball, playing with my cousin, read a book and family trip. Those things are I did during chuseok. This chuseok was the most perfect chuseok during my life. I didn’t go to school for 9 days also I played so hard. I played with my friends; I visited my grandparent’s house, played with my cousin and family trip. This chuseok gave many things to our family, before this chuseok I don’t like my grandparent’s but I realized my grandparents are nice people also my family and I became closer.
Chuseok is the most important holiday in Korea. Before I wrote this essay, I thought chuseok is a just little bit more special than other days but after I wrote this essay, I realized chuseok is a meaningful holiday to Korean. Korean people should know meaning of chuseok and keep thinking about this traditional day.
Sunday, September 30, 2007
Sunday

Today was a normal on Sunday. I think I enjoyed today, also I ready for tommorow. Today was a fun, interesting and excting day. I hope I can enjoy my life until end of my life.
I learned relax, before today I didn't know much about what is relax but I figured out meaning of relax and I will be a relax person.
Saturday, September 29, 2007
9/29/07
How do I feel?
Today, it was a okay day. Today I slept more than 10 hours. I don't know why, but I feel fantastic. However I took a lot of break but I am still tired because I didn't take a break for 4 days. I wiil take more break therefore I can concentrate on monday.
What can I learned from?
I learned many mathmetical things, when I studied algebra I realized new mathmatical stuff. I will memorize these things untile I die.
Friday, September 28, 2007
I am so tired!!
Today it was absolutely tired day, I think i need take a break and need some sleep. Also today it was a funny day. I spent a lot of time with my friends also it was fun.
When I felt tired i need take a break. When I arrived in home I got a terrible cold. I think I realized I need break when i felt tired.
9/27/07
reed with my parents. The children was so annoying and hard to carrying. After that my parents back. We went to a mountain and rood motorcycle and I arrived in Seoul Station at 12 am.Fun, Happiness, Exciting, tired.
When I road motorcycle it was really fantastic, fun and exciting. First time when I heard Kyung-Jo I thougt it is a boring place but I realized it is a fantastic place! I strongly recommed foring people have to vist Kyung-JO
Kyung Jo is a great place!! before I vistied JyungJo i thought it is a boring place but i realized it is a fantastic place.
9/26/07
rrived in Gyung-Jo we ate launch and we went to Bulguksa and a museum. I saw many Korean culture such as clothe, house, weapone and crown. After that my familt wemt to spa except me. When they came back, we wento to a resturant and ate itlian food. Aftert that we went to Norabang and back to hotel.I was so tired also today was a great day! When I watched Korean civilization it was boring but when we went to norabang it was great and food was great aslo the pasta was fantastic!.
When we wathched Korean traditaional stuff, I was so boring therefore unfortuatelly I used bad words and I got in trouble. I think I should not used bad words infront of adult.
Tuesday, September 25, 2007
Dayeon Lee a busy day

Today, It was pretty exciting day because I played with my firend instead of playing with my cousin and I am very happy because I finisehd all my homework and my poster. I hope our family trip will be fun, interesting and exciting.
If You need a help! than go ask to other people. When I was young I thought I am not aloud to ask question to other people but I realized asking a question to other poeple is good thing not a embarrassing thing. I think I should question therefor I can solve my curiously.
Monday, September 24, 2007

I don’t know who is he but he gave me a huge shocked, I felt sort of stress and anger because I never thought I will lose to anybody. I am really sad and angry but I still beat twice and I am one year younger than him so if I do more practice I think I can be a best player. However I disappointed to my self.
Need more practice! I think I need more practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! I think people need to practice a lot when they achieve something important therefore conclusion is Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice! Practice!
Sunday, September 23, 2007
Sunday

Today it was a normal Sunday. I went to church, after church I went to my home and do my homework. I was bored today, also I was tired. That’s why I my journal is short and simple.
Today I was extremely tired because I was sick yesterday also I played so hardly and I worked so hard therefore I am extremely tired. I think I should take a break and take an enough sleep.
Saturday, September 22, 2007
Um.............So sick

Today, I felt two feelings. One is happiness, and the other one is painful. When I played with my friends I was happy and exited but after that I was extremely painful. I don’t know why but I had headache and stomached. I think I felt little bit better than a few hors ago.
I need a break, when I feel tired or sick! I realized I have to take a rest and need enough sleep. I though I am a super teenager but figured out that is not a true. I need a break. I think I need to learn how to control my self.