yesterday, I went to ski with my friends. Most of um road board also it was really fun. We went to Jisan and road 6 hours, at the morning it was not corowded but during the afternoon it was really crowded. however it was really fun.

Snow board is a great sports. I think it was a great day, because it was really fun, exciting and interesting.

I figrued out a new skills, I can trun 720, with rushing.

How many people died because of communism, how many people were suffering, how many people lost their freedom because of communism! It have to change, there should be no communism in the world. Many countries were communism during cold war but those countries changed to democracy and they realized communism is worst than democracy. Communism is the political belief that all people are equal and that workers should control the means of producing things, and democracy means is a system of government in which people choose their rulers by voting for them in elections, democracy is better than communism because it has freedom, have a better economic system and they have peace.

Democracies have freedom! Imagine that people have to live in a certain area and they are not aloud to do anything if government do not aloud them to do, how terrible is it!? Democracy countries provide freedom to people, also they can buy their own house, car, and they can earn their own money, but in communism country they are not aloud to keep their own car, house or money. Citizen of democracy can do whatever thing if it is legal and right thing. This is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.

If you want to be different with the other people than you should be in democracy. If you are hard worker or do extra work than you might become successful person also you can have your own money therefore you can be a rich person, but in the communism country no matter what you did, you have to get same amount of money with person who didn’t work hard, how unfair is it?, if you want be different with the other people than you should go to democracy country, you can be successful and be a rich person.

A few hundreds years ago many countries were suffered because of war, but in democracy country you don’t have to worry about, people who live in democracy country, they are safe and government protect citizen, but people who live in communism they always have to worry about their security also the government do no care about their citizen’s safety, this is one of reason why democracy is better than communism.

Like what you read in this essay, democracy is better than communism because they have freedom, better economic and last it has peace.

APM!

Today, my friends and I decided to go APM, which is in Dongdamon. I use to go ShinSaga department store but we went to APM. Peter, Richard, Joon and I bought many clothe also we went to Meaung dong and bought many food that we can eat.

Today, was a great day because I bought many clothe and it is really chip. I think today was one of the most happy day in my life.


I though dongdamon is really bad place but i realized it is good place to us.

second draft

World War 2
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee

Many people think World War 2 is a huge, complicate, violence and useless war during world his story but World War two gave huge effects to world. In 1939, September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. This result gives many effects to world but! what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.

This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.

If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.

German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons but! They are not winner of World War 2, Germany is loser of World War 2, middle of world war 2, many country thought German will winner of World War2 but, it didn’t go like that, during attacking Russia, many German soldier died because of weather. It was very cold therefore the weapons were not working. What if German is winner of World War 2 than it will give a huge effect to world. If German beat United States and the other European countries than World common language will be change to German because people want to learn and know, about strongest world language. Second many country will be communism country not democracy country, if a lot of countries are communism than It will give many unbenefit things to world economic.

There is many way to change history or other complicated happen, like what I said in this essay, there is many way to change result of World War 2. First, if Japan is winner of World War 2 or if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb than probably it will change whole history of world. Also if German is winner of World War 2 than it also change whole world history.

sundy!!!

Life Church~

Today is my fourth time that I went to Life Chruch, usually dorm kids and staff kids are go to life but I decided to go Life Chruch, I called to Joon and peter, and I asked them to come and they came tolife chruch. After chruck we went to PC room and played starcraft it was pretty fun aftet that we went to KFC and ate the chicken.

Today it was little bit special day because today is Sunday but I played with my friends, I think I am in very goood mood, I hope I can have this kind of day, untill I die.

In chruch I learned about prayer

Today, is the most boring day in my life, I woke up around at 11 o'clcok, when I woke up I saw a letter on my desk, I started to read that letter, the main point was " Hey son we will back to home around 8 o'clock therefore, stay in home and complete your homewrok, do not go out side and play with your firends. " After that I took shower and do my homework, also I read Charlie and the great glass elevator" However after that I wathced TV for 3? hours, however it was the most boring day during my life.

Today, it was boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! boring! day....................................... I hope I can have a better life tommorow.

Today, I dind't learn anything................

I came to GSIS last September and in this school there is Award things, Last year I didn't get any awards but today I got writing award, Mr. Fambro called my name and Miss. Brown gave me award thing. When I get award thing everyone were surprised.


Today, I am really good mood ^^, I will work hard and I will get many awards thing next semester but I have to go to Hakwon in English therefore I think my mood will be go don.


I realized that if I worked hard than, I will get pice.

World War 2
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee

Many people think World War 2 is a huge and complicated war during world his story but World War two is giving huge effect to world. 1939. September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. These results give many effects to world but what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.

This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.

If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.

German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons.

World War 2 is giving huge effect, probably it is biggest war.

Sunday

"Dayeon! you should wake up, it is 9:40. I opened my eyes with my mom's calling, when I wake up I started to prepared to go chruch, I use to go chruch in seould but i moved to Suwon therefore I went to life church where is in Gsis, after chapel my friend and I ate pizza, chips and chinse food. I don't know why but our church bought huge amout of delicious food, however it was really delicious. OH and I bought Ipod.

Today, I felt fantastic because I ate delisious food and life chruch was great^^, probably i will go to this chruch. I think today is one of my best day.

I learned about Ipod, Ipod is a cool and great equipment.

Friday

Today, I slpet in peter's house, we played card game for 2 and half hours also we played computer games. After that we wento out side and walk for while, after that we ordered a chicken, steven and I ate many peice of chicekn but peter didn't, and we slept.



Today, it was really fun day, because us four played in Bundang and Steven, and I slept in peter's house with peter. However it was real fantastic day.

I learned world war 2 in Hakwon, we use to discuss about one sepesific topic but we learned about World war 2
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The three most important relationships that a student has.

Imagine that you are the only person in the world. There is no person beside you, no animals beside you, or no plants beside you. Nothing is beside you. How terrible it is? In human life the most important thing is relationship, without relation people can not communicate with other people. While, students think relationship is a very important thing to them also relationship give many effect to their life. There are three most important relationships that a student has; first it is relationship between their families such as their parents. Second, relationship between their friends. Third, relationship between their pet. These three things are the most important things in their life.

“You have to do what I am saying! You have obeyed to me” this is what most parents say to their children. There are two kinds of relationships between parents and their children. First they have great relationships, they have meaningful conversation between each other also they can understand their emotion. If they have great relation ship than the children will learn many things form their parents such as, good social relationships and how to respect elder people. Second there are horrible relationships between parents and children. They can not understand each other and they don’t want to have conversation with each other. If they have bad relationship than they are not learn good mantle society and they will not know what respect is. In addition a relationship between parents and their children is important thing.

Your friends can give a huge effect to our life. When you have great friends than he or she will give you many benefit things to you, such as when you choose a wrong choice than they will help and give an advice to you. When you tried to smoke they will try to stop you. If you have bad friends they will give you bad effect to you, such as they will recommend bad thing to you such as smoking, drugging and the other things. Also they will give you bad opportunity to you.

After school you went to your lovely home and there are no parents or brother or sister. There is a quite tiny dog is looking for you and trying to play with you. These days, people do not like dog but pets are really huge part to students. When they feel loneliness or pain, most teenagers doesn’t want to share their feeling with their parents or friends. If they don’t express their feeling than probably they will feel strong pain and they will get huge amount of stress. If they have a pet than they can express or telling their feeling to their pet. The pets are the most believable thing in earth. Human can be trade but pets never be trade human.

Like what I said, relationships are very important to people. It gives many effects to people. When you are student those relationships are giving a huge effect to student’s life. Relationships between parents are the most important relationship. Second, relationship between their friends this relationships are second important relationship to students. Last, relationships between their pets. Also students have to make great relationships between their family (parents), friends and their pet.

SFS( Soccer)

At 10 :05 my sister and I leave our house, and we arrived in school around at 10:10. When we arrive in school we took C bus and went to SFS, there were no friends in bus because, all my friends are morning team or there are using their car therefore I listing music for 1 and half hours. However when I arrive in SFS, I was really sick therefore I couldn't run propery. After one game, our team played with IIS, I made thee goals in this game therefore our team beat IIS after that we played KIS team1 we lost really badly, I was really frustrated because they were extremly rood, however next game we played with KIS team2 it was tied and this game was okay.

Today, I am very frustrated because of some of stupid KIS students, Also we lost w games and my condition was not great because of those reason I am very bad mood.


I realized and I learned that KIS kids are stupid, next time when I meet KIS kids probably i will just ignored them