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South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.

North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea have a better economic therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore they can help with this. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore they can have similar mind with us.

In 21 century, money and power is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. …………………

If Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. When they become one county. Second …………………….
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Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve, North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve.