first draft

Dayeon Lee
Writing 8th
Mr. Fambro

First draft

When I saw his music video or listing music I can feel, powerful, enjoyable, Flexible, rhythmical and surprised. Most people think Hip Hop and R&B is for man but theses day it is silently changing. A few years ago a woman entrance on the stage. Ciara Princess Harris, she was born is October 25, 1985. In the summer of 2004 she made hit song its call “Goodies” the second album was Ciara: The Evolution, was released in December 2006. There were few hit songs “get up” “promise” these two songs are represent her. The album has sold nearly sold two millions.

She was born in Austin, Taxes. She is the only child in her home. She grew up in army base in the other countries such as Germany, New York, California and the other cities. She has a great personality therefore she did adjustment very well; also she is a great leader. During her teens Ciara and her family lived in Atlanta. When she was young she loved to listening to the music and dancing with her friends. She was not good at subjects that need study. However Ciara joined Hearsay and worked on her songwriting. The group was not match with Ciara therefore eventually she left the group. Ciara graduated high school that is in United States, she began to make a song and her first album was “Yeah” After that her song “Goodies” this song is the most popular song in United States and United Kingdom also the albums were selling 2.63 million. “Goodies” is world hit song many people in world know about this song. There are many hit songs and albums. In 2005 Ciara made DVD that include her Music video such as documents, “Goodies, Missy Elliott's "Lose Control" from her album The Cookbook and Bow Wow’s "Like You" from his album Wanted. In 2006, Ciara started a new year by winning her first Germany Award for Missy Elliott's "Lose Control". After that she made second single album, that album was selling in many different European country including United Kingdom. There are many albums and most of those album songs are hit songs. Also she has concerts in Asia. Ciara is a famous world star and she has many concerts in Asia, America and Europe.

Her song and albums: "Goodies" ,Missy Elliott, Oh, Goodies: The Videos & More, So What" All You've Got, Get Up "Promise Ring." "That's Right (I will explain these songs also tell specific things people’s feeling)


She is a top R&B and Hip hop star she worked really hard, she is an intelligent woman but she worked really hard. First…………………..
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Before I do this essay, I thought Ciara is a normal singer just like the other one but I realized she is a different singer with the other singer. I strongly recommend that people who like hip hop or R&B, they should listen her songs. She is a favorite and famous world star. She has a lot of hit songs and she is a hard worker.