second draft

World War 2
Sheltered writing 8
Mr. Fambro’s class
By Dayeon Lee

Many people think World War 2 is a huge, complicate, violence and useless war during world his story but World War two gave huge effects to world. In 1939, September first Germany attacked Poland, England and France. United States, Poland, England and France they fought with, German, Italy and Japan. The winner of World War 2 is Poland, England, France and United states. This result gives many effects to world but! what if German, Italy and Japan is winner of World War 2? Than it might change whole world history and style also it give huge effect to colony country such as Korea. In this essay, I will talk about What if Japan is winner of World War2, what if German is winner of World War2 and What if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan.

This day, Japan is second strongest country and strongest country in Asia. Japan has second strong economic power in world. At the beginning of World War 2, Japan was beating all the country in Asia. Some day, during World War 2 Japan attacked United States because of declaration of war United States decided to drop Atomic bomb in Japan, but what if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan? If they didn’t drop atomic bomb in Japan, many U.S. army will die because of Japanese, if many U.S army died than the other country might attack United Sates. Also Japan might be winner of World War2, if German decided to help Japan; probably Japan can be winner of World War two.

If Japan is winner of World War 2 than it will change many things in the war. World common language is English because United States are strongest county in the world, but if Japan is winner, than world common language might change English to Japanese, everybody in the world will try to learn Japanese. Korea was one of colony of Japan. United States dropped atomic bomb therefore Korea become independent country. If Japan is winner of World War two than Korea will not become independent country, if Korea is not independent country than there is no Samsung, Hyundai or Daewoo. It will give a huge effect to World economic. World common religion is Christian but it will change to Shinto if Japan is winner of World War two. If Shinto is world common religion, people have to believe nature.

German is a country who started World War 2, during World War 2; German had strongest guns, tank and the other weapons but! They are not winner of World War 2, Germany is loser of World War 2, middle of world war 2, many country thought German will winner of World War2 but, it didn’t go like that, during attacking Russia, many German soldier died because of weather. It was very cold therefore the weapons were not working. What if German is winner of World War 2 than it will give a huge effect to world. If German beat United States and the other European countries than World common language will be change to German because people want to learn and know, about strongest world language. Second many country will be communism country not democracy country, if a lot of countries are communism than It will give many unbenefit things to world economic.

There is many way to change history or other complicated happen, like what I said in this essay, there is many way to change result of World War 2. First, if Japan is winner of World War 2 or if United States didn’t drop atomic bomb than probably it will change whole history of world. Also if German is winner of World War 2 than it also change whole world history.