Final draft

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Mr.Fambro class
Written by Dayeon Lee
Final draft

South Korea and North Korea have been officially divided since the Korean War, (n 1950-1953) because of Korean War many people such as family and friends separate. People who were in North Korea they became citizen in North Korea also they became communism even they don’t want to be. People who were in South Korea became citizen in South Korea also they became democracy even they don’t want to. People should have opportunity of choice the government is not aloud to make a decision what ever they want to do. The government have to make the citizen of North and South Korean people can communicate each other therefore they can make or do business and help them each other but the service officer, president and the other leaders of these two countries has to communicate and they should communicate and solve these problems.

North Korea and South Korea was same country before the Korean War. The war started because United States and Russia decided to divide Korea to two different countries. Korean War gave huge damage to North Korea and South Korea, because of this war they don’t even want to communicate, do business. We have to unified again and make a one Korea. South Korea has a strong economic power therefore they can provide many things to North Korea such as new technology, corn, construction material and democracy. New technology such as a semiconductor, Korea is the most popular and has a better skill according to any countries in the world therefore South Korea can help North Korea with technology. A few mouth ago there were flood in North Korea because of this flood many people died and many farmers lost their territory and crops. South Korea helped North Korea by providing crops and food. North Korea is the only country where communism is. Russia and China was the biggest communism countries in the world but they realized communism can’t be helpful for their citizen and their self. In communism country there is no individual property therefore most people do not want to do hard work because no matter what they will get same amount of money, food, and territory with people who doesn’t work hard. South Korea should tell how good democracy is therefore their economic can improve and South Korea has to teach about effort. (Without effort we can’t achieve anything)

In 21 century, money and authority is moving everything. South Korea and North Korea was one county therefore they need to reunified. They can communicate, helping each other and do work with each other. Imagine how great North and South Korea can work together. When I read this article I was quite shocked because I never thought North and South Korea will work with same time or helping each other. In the article it said, South Korea is making a road that connecting North Korea and South Korea. It is a meaningful thing because it means North Korea want to communicate and open their mind with South Korea. People can eat food one hand but it is hard to eat, people can walk with one foot but it is hard do to walk and people can’ live with half heart. Korea is divided in two countries. It means they lost their half part of body. Imagine we are don’t have half part of body it is terrible and it is uncomfortable. It give many effect to both side.


If South Korea and North Korea be one country, many things will be change. First Korea will give a lot of effect to world economic and a military junta because south have a great technology and North Korea has an amazing military stuff. People in the world they know Korean people are very brilliant and intelligent. Also they think North Korea is one of powerful country in the world. Second Korea will give many effects to world economic because South Korea has great technologies but the companies have to pay a lot of money to worker but North Korea doesn’t have great technology but they have chip and strong worker. Third, if Korea and North Korea unified than there is no divided country in the world. Also there is no communism country in the world, it is related with peace. North Korea is one of the most harmful and dangerous country in the world. It will keep world peace. It will give many effects to world economic and the other things. They should find their half part and have to improve many things.

Without effort nothing is possible! If we want to achieve something that is important than we should do hard work and put a lot of effort to that specific situation. . North Korea and South Korea should put more effort and put more sincerity to these problems therefore they can solve. Both Korea is putting effort and they are communicating each other. Also like what said in article, if those projects are complete and successful than it is coming closer to unified.

Extra feeling, extra opinion
Before I read and write about this article I thought North Korea is a uneducated and wild country because in the news and the other country said North Korea is the most harmful and dangerous country in the world therefore I thought North Korea is not okay country even people who were in North Korea and I had same ancestor. After reading and writing about this article I realized we need to figure out how family is important.