i am so tired!!! because, I went to KyungJo also I went to Lotte Word(today). I should be take a break today but my friends invited me so I went to Lotte Word and I met my korean school friends, Helena and my YISS friends when I came back to my house it was 9 o'clcok and I started to write my journal.
Today it was absolutely tired day, I think i need take a break and need some sleep. Also today it was a funny day. I spent a lot of time with my friends also it was fun.
When I felt tired i need take a break. When I arrived in home I got a terrible cold. I think I realized I need break when i felt tired.
Today it was absolutely tired day, I think i need take a break and need some sleep. Also today it was a funny day. I spent a lot of time with my friends also it was fun.
When I felt tired i need take a break. When I arrived in home I got a terrible cold. I think I realized I need break when i felt tired.
3 comments:
Lotte World is fun. It's lucky to meet your friends there. Some mistakes that you had was, on your third paragraph for last sentence, I think you don't need to write "I think". Just start sentence with "I realized"
Did you have fun in Lotte World?
I saw you we had lots of fun!
what about you guys. It seemed you guy also had good time
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